Marking Michelle Obama's College Thesis GRAMMATICAL AND OTHER ERRORS

In Part One, I examined Michelle Obama's college thesis.  I found that she appears to have been an angry, irrational and possibly dangerous person.  I also found that it's hard to believe she would've had the intelligence level required to graduate from law school, much less get accepted into law school.

While reviewing the logic behind her thesis' arguments, I began to mark her grammar and punctuation.  It was my intention to publish her grammatical errors at the conclusion of my review.  

However, her grammatical errors are so numerous that I've decided it's not worthwhile to record and correct them all.  The list of errors that I have compiled is very numerous, considering they were made on a short space of only five pages (pages 12 to 16).

Marking Michelle Obama's College Thesis PART ONE

I came upon a very interesting discovery: Michelle Obama's college thesis from 1985!

I couldn't wait to read it...and to evaluate it! Why?  Knowing what I know about her now, I am very curious to find out what her intellectual ability and her belief system may have been like during those influential, formative years!

My current belief is that Michelle Obama is not likely to be a good person.

Why?  Well, I say that for two main reasons.

Is Tim Wise an illogical, hateful person? PART ONE

ABOUT THIS SERIES OF ARTICLES

I first became aware of Tim Wise when he was featured on CNN, where he discussed public outrage regarding an article of his.  The article is titled "An Open Letter to the White Right, On the Occasion of Your Recent, Successful Temper Tantrum".

I've since briefly reviewed his website, and have come to the conclusion that he's likely not a good person. 

I get the feeling that he tends to write primarily, or wholly, about white racism.  Look at the titles of his books:

"Weight classes" for the arm length of UFC fighters?

I watched UFC 126 recently.  Did anyone see the Jon Jones-Ryan Bader fight?  Jon Jones' reach is 84.5 inches.  84.5 inches!  That's astonishing!  It's uncommon to see MMA fighters with a reach above 77" or 78", including the heavyweights!  Jones' reach is greater than that of the 6'11" fighter Stefan Struve!

It got me thinking.  Is it fair to pit Jon Jones against a guy like Ryan Bader, who has only a 74" reach?

I'm sure many people would say sure, it's fair.  Arm length is one of the factors that makes an athlete simply better than other athletes, is it not? 

But is that type of thinking consistent with the athletic separations that already occur?

People don't work to INCREASE wealth. They work to LOSE wealth!

Today I was thinking about a subject I discussed in a previous article of mine.  In the comment section of that article, I mentioned that it's impossible for a country to become wealthier when its citizens sell products to fellow citizens.  You will be hard pressed to find "experts" make the same statement!  (Many readers seemed incredulous at my statement).  So who's the real expert? Myself, or the "experts"?  Judge for yourself!